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Melinda Cleans My Teeth
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Charlotte Mandel


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Intent blue eyes
of prairie skies—
white coat and denim jeans—
Her fingers click
with a silver pick
exploring before she cleans—
A musical straw
gobbles in my jaw
like a flute with dancing beans—
While toot’ by toot’
round each tingling root
a bladelet intervenes—
Now a powerbrush
circles in a rush,
toboggan-fast careens—
To the orange taste
of a sandy paste
rubbed in by tambourines—
The pirouette
of a pistol jet
splashes in serpentines—
Swirled in spit
the scouring grit
is sluiced and sucked from the scene—
And my teeth applaud
with a smile as broad
as diamond mezzanines.

This poem first appeared in Busenhalter (Fall, 2004)
Used here with the author’s permission.

 



Photo credit: Richard Mandel

Charlotte Mandel lives in New Jersey. Though she didn't embrace poetry until midlife, she is the author of eleven collections and her awards include a Lifetime Achievement Award from Brooklyn College, the New Jersey Poets Prize, and two fellowships from the New Jersey State Council on the Arts. Charlotte's published work also includes the Eileen W. Barnes Award anthology of older women poets, Saturday's Women, and a series of essays on the role of cinema in the life and work of Hilda Doolittle.  Learn more about Charlotte at charlottemandel.com.


Post New Comment:
penhart:
Love this, Charlotte! And congrats on the book!
Posted 03/14/2015 07:18 PM
rhonasheridan:
I just added one in the Open Mike on the same subject! I loved 'the swirling in spit'. What a lovely way of putting it!
Posted 03/12/2015 02:01 AM
Cindy:
yup; had mine done yesterday and it is just like that
Posted 03/11/2015 08:49 AM
Charly:
Just had my teeth cleaned. Love this, will print and take it to my dear hygienist.
Posted 03/11/2015 07:04 AM


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