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Does not snow much, here
but — when it does — fat snowflakes!
Footprints in meringue.
© by Jana Kalina.
Used here with the author's permission
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Jana Kalina lives with her husband on Vancouver Island. During her lifetime, she has lived extensively on three of the planet's seven continents and, today, her pursuits can be distilled down to three things: Buddhism, bonsai cultivation and, of course, poetry--especially haiku.
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Anastasia:
So expressive! I love that last line!
Posted 01/30/2021 02:56 PM
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Wilda Morris:
Love the last line!
Posted 01/16/2021 06:16 PM
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Lori Levy:
Love "footprints in meringue."
Posted 01/12/2021 09:50 PM
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Jancan:
We don't get much snow in Mississippi either. I love your haiku--great metaphor in line 3!
Posted 01/12/2021 07:41 PM
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Larry Schug:
Not only the comma,whole lotta great punctuation going on in these lines. (Good eye, Kevin Arnold). I'd call this poem inspired and inspiring.
Posted 01/12/2021 08:53 AM
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michael escoubas:
Nicely done, Jana! Not only for the haiku but your name has its own delightful jingle!!
Posted 01/12/2021 08:32 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
Sparse delightful poem. Love Footprints in meringue.
Posted 01/12/2021 07:20 AM
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KevinArnold:
Oh that comma in the first line is so enticing. Brava!
Posted 01/12/2021 06:38 AM
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