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Does not snow much, here
but — when it does — fat snowflakes!
Footprints in meringue.
© by Jana Kalina.
Used here with the author’s permission
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Jana Kalina lives with her husband on Vancouver Island. Given her background in social sciences and journalism, she's found her voice in what she calls poetic journalism — a way of documenting her Bohemian family history and her life (from a young age) in the many countries she's lived in and travelled through.
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Anastasia:
So expressive! I love that last line!
Posted 01/30/2021 02:56 PM
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Wilda Morris:
Love the last line!
Posted 01/16/2021 06:16 PM
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Lori Levy:
Love "footprints in meringue."
Posted 01/12/2021 09:50 PM
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Jancan:
We don't get much snow in Mississippi either. I love your haiku--great metaphor in line 3!
Posted 01/12/2021 07:41 PM
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cork:
I read that they have meringue in Madrid this week.
Posted 01/12/2021 09:02 AM
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Larry Schug:
Not only the comma,whole lotta great punctuation going on in these lines. (Good eye, Kevin Arnold). I'd call this poem inspired and inspiring.
Posted 01/12/2021 08:53 AM
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michael escoubas:
Nicely done, Jana! Not only for the haiku but your name has its own delightful jingle!!
Posted 01/12/2021 08:32 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
Sparse delightful poem. Love Footprints in meringue.
Posted 01/12/2021 07:20 AM
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KevinArnold:
Oh that comma in the first line is so enticing. Brava!
Posted 01/12/2021 06:38 AM
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