Open Mic User Submitted Poetry

Julianne Carlile:
Or are you referring to the two lines that begin "The desertion by the parents..."?
Posted 05/14/2011 06:31 AM

Julianne Carlile:
If I dropped the first two lines, the poem wouldn't make any sense.
Posted 05/13/2011 06:20 AM

Julianne Carlile:
Just don't use it to often LOL.
Posted 05/07/2011 06:09 AM

lanet:
Having said that I want you to know that I've used the phrase, "the pressures of pig politics," about a hundred times since I've read your poem.
Posted 05/04/2011 11:32 AM

Julianne Carlile:
Yes, that's what I was aiming for.
Posted 05/04/2011 07:01 AM

lanet:
Here's what I get. I once coached little leage baseball and once we were down by two runs with bases loaded two outs in the bottom of the last inning and my worst batter was up. Everyone expected me to pull him and let someone else bat. I didn't and he hit a tripple and won the game for us. I think that you are expressing the feeling that there is pain in life but to never get to swing at the ball is even worse.
Posted 05/03/2011 07:06 AM

Julianne Carlile:
I would really like some feedback on this one.
Posted 05/01/2011 07:25 AM