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grasping
by
Charity VanHorn

 
grasping at moments drifting by
paper fragments caught in the wind
captivating, eluding
fingers against bare palms
--Submitted by CharityV on 2011-07-28.
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Amber:
I rather liked this, but I think maybe I'd take out the word "captivating" and just make it the three clean simple lines.
Posted 06/25/2013 08:04 AM


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