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Whispers of the moon
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Christopher Saleh |
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I heard whispers of the moon
Of things to come
The subdued Ray of light
Light of mesmerizing moon
Crept under my skin
Beaming out from my fingertips
Whispers were of an inspired life
A life lived with a solemn purpose
A purpose bigger than ourselves
But yet within us
Flourishing and shining for a life lived well.
We come bare skinned into this world
And leave with nothing more than that
Exception is the lives we touch in those years, months and days
That was the message within those Rays
As I heard, whispers of the moon
Of things to come.
Christopher S. Saleh
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--Submitted by Socratezzz on 2014-10-20.
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rhonasheridan:
The full-stop at the end of verse three is , to me. Fine. The comma after the word 'heard' in verse five does not lie easy with me. There is no other punctuation in your poem, so I feel thes two must be important to you. I liked your poem so much - but as an ancient old stickler of punctuAtion I would like a little bit more of it, to be able to read the poem better.
Posted 10/24/2014 01:57 AM
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