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My small dog waits in the grass
For me to hurry up.
He needs to keep me in sight
And that's hard on a pup.
He likes to chase things that move
And sometimes things that don't.
Most things I want him to do,
Well, you can guess--he won't.
And yet I love him dearly;
He needs me more than most,
Cuz if he didn't have me
He'd probably be toast.
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--Submitted by Julianne Carlile on 2010-11-09.
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Julianne Carlile:
But I did change it from "He likely would be toast" to the above. Now I'm worried.
Posted 11/23/2010 09:01 AM
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Julianne Carlile:
Usually people laugh at the last line.
Posted 11/20/2010 12:43 PM
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sillygirl:
cute. :) while it struck me strangely at first, i like that your verse and rhyme scheme 'match' a cute little dog.
i would love to see a stanza with some physical descriptors, from hair style and color to what kind of wagging tail he's got... I'm left wanting an image of his particular cute.
Posted 11/14/2010 07:27 AM
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