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blossom atremble
awaiting the hummingbird
zip, dip, quick sip, gone

by Phyllis Beckman.
Used with the author’s permission.

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Phyllis Beckman begins the day with a candle, coffee, and Your Daily Poem. A member of the Wisconsin Fellowship of Poets, she recently attended their 65th Anniversary Conference. Phyllis feels privileged to enjoy a quiet life in the town of Onalaska, encouraged in her writing by Women Writers' Ink, (WWink), of La Crosse, Wisconsin. She has a fishing license and recently caught a sizeable bluegill in the Black River at the local park.


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ranchhandwife:
Smile maker!
Posted 07/14/2015 11:49 AM
Jo:
Very well done. Terrific haiku.
Posted 07/10/2015 04:21 PM
transitions:
Clever haiku! I love this form, each word is important and this is classic with a humorous twist. Brava!
Posted 07/10/2015 12:23 PM
Lori Levy:
Beautiful image.
Posted 07/10/2015 11:52 AM
Dorcas:
Come and gone
Posted 07/10/2015 10:13 AM
Cindy:
I love haiku.
Posted 07/10/2015 08:50 AM
paradea:
Lovely!
Posted 07/10/2015 08:42 AM
Supa:
Guess I wasn't too alert, of course it's beautiful Haiku. You really can see the hummingbird and flower.
Posted 07/10/2015 08:13 AM
njc:
a perfect example of when less is more! nice.
Posted 07/10/2015 07:56 AM
abell:
Lovely haiku. This describes the humminbird so well! I am a fan of haiku verse, thanks for thus one.
Posted 07/10/2015 06:14 AM


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