Erle Kelly lives in Long Beach, California, where he tutors at a local elementary school and attends a weekly poetry workshop. Retired from a career in marketing management, Erle and his wife enjoy traveling and exploring the world, and also enjoy discovering the wonder of their local environment.
Great description for a short poem. I love the ending. Posted 07/29/2015 07:35 PM
Mary Lou Taylor:
Takes me back to living near Manhattan Beach and later Santa Monica. The sounds so vivid, so right. Posted 07/29/2015 01:44 PM
I really like this poem--lovely, especially the simile.
Janice Canerdy Posted 07/29/2015 12:17 PM
the last line really got me...bravo.. Posted 07/29/2015 11:13 AM
Good one!! Posted 07/29/2015 09:27 AM
Spare and lovely. Posted 07/29/2015 08:04 AM
I love all the sounds in the two penultimate lines (7 & 8). Posted 07/29/2015 02:59 AM
I loved the splashing embers. But the wolf hour sounds were almost better. A super little poem. Posted 07/29/2015 02:54 AM